Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Letters from the Tormented Soul


Worlds separate us apart,
Your words shattered me million pieces apart.
I tried so hard to reach you;
Yet, my ghostly hands can't even touch you.
But what can I do if I always think of you
Even if it makes me whimper and feel blue?
This sentiment for you feels so true.

I wish you could see
You mean everything to me.
But you don't-and will never-see me
Though you're always in front of me.
I'm invisible in your naked eyes;
You're the only apple of my eyes.

Only words can tell what my mouth can't say
But they go wrong when I'm on my way.
I'm craving to tell you what I'm feeling;
I'm drowning because of this crazy feeling.

I tirelessly scream your name
Am I the one to blame
If my attempts were in vain
And it only caused me so much pain?

If my last words even reach you
Just assume I am dead for I
Strive so hard to reach you but
I fall in the abyss of emptiness
To suffer from great distress
And die because of extreme sadness.

13 comments:

  1. galing mo CARROTS!

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  2. imba :)
    idol elijah...

    ampzz :>

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  3. puro malungkot ata mga ginagawa mung poems ??
    try to write something happy ?

    haha . nag suggest ?
    suggestion lng nman .
    :)

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  4. nc one.. poh .. idol :D

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  5. idol carrOts. wag ka nmn masyadong emo. =))

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  6. like it. pang dota pa.. hehe

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  7. ^^ Damn, this is incredible. I wish I knew sooner you had this kind of talent. If you're this great at writing poems, it would be incredible if you write a song.

    Beautifully romantic with a tint of regret, sorrow, longing and unrequited love.

    ^^ Nice -Leo

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  8. You are improving :)
    pero....too dark...gothic....yeah, you get the point.

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  9. Nice, Really like them. :D

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  10. nice blog . im looking forward for your nxt .

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