Friday, August 13, 2010

Red Bloody Roses

 Red Bloody Roses

These roses are real so
I wrote my love for you on paper roses
Sealed with heartfelt poetry
And glaring honesty so
It can live 'til eternity.

These roses are red
For it was made with bloodshed
From my trembling bloody hands
Hoping it would even reach your hands.

These roses are real yet
It has no impaling thorns
Nor the roses' sweet scent
But it has the bitter smell of blood
From my anguished veins.

These roses aren't dead and
It would never die for it
Was blessed with an eternal life
From my undying love
For this is the only way to tell you
And words will never be enough
To let you know.

11 comments:

  1. medyo emo :)) hehe . pero isa nnmang obra :)
    the rose ? is dat ur heart ?

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  2. grabe k tlga .
    emotional tlga lhat ng ginagawa mu .
    lagi nmang mgnda gawa mu ..

    2 THUMBS UP .

    i wish i could write like you .. haha
    >.<

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  3. nice selection of words :)
    emotional, yet very catchy.
    cool! :)

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  4. It's true, I like the selection of words. One word of critic , lessen redundancy. But aside from that, it's close to perfection.

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  5. hmmm...
    yabang may mga pa comment comment pa sila...

    hahaha...

    ako bilang kuya ito lang masasabi ko:
    (di naman ako marunung ganu ng english)

    keep it up...
    maganda sya kung sa maganda...

    yet, compare to the real essence of literature...
    this stuff is just a mere part of what is the sole meaning of poetry!

    :D

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  6. pre msydo kang inspired sa poem mo..
    dont take it seriously hahaha

    -rgn|-[S]cOTT

    gurls paad ako facebook
    ^^

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  7. Are you the one who did this? :D

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  8. ^^v

    ang Creepy ng title but
    sentimental ung meaning nya
    imba sa lalim :>>

    good work idol :))
    -ampzz

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